splish splash - Stuck?! sketches August 15th (layout 271)

I love love love the August 15th sketch from stuck?! sketches by Laura Whitaker mostly because it is a 1-page layout but with multiple photos (which is quite unique). Here is the sketch:

Here is my take:

I have a feeling that this layout is missing something but I can't quite put my finger on what it is missing but I refuse to let this sit on my scrap space (aka my kitchen counter) for the next couple of days/weeks/months while I figure out what is wrong with it so I am leaving it as is.

Supplies used: 

I splattered Tim Holtz distress paint (salty ocean) over the background paper

papers: bo bunny (lemonade stand: lemonade stand, carnival)

pinwheels: recollections

stickers: bo bunny (lemonade stand combo stickers)

other: pretty little studio (sand castle word flashcards), bo bunny (lemonade noteworthy)

Thank you for stopping in, and if you have any suggestion(s) of what I can add to this layout I would really appreciate it. Also hope you can play along this month at stuck?! they have awesome fun sketches to play with!!!: http://stucksketches.blogspot.ca/2014/08/august-15th-sketch-challenge.html